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rose Poetry - just poetry ....

bjbdbest (Beverly) of team Discovery suggested we establish a thread dealing with poetry. That I think is an excellent idea.
Beverly herself writes poetry, and I hope she and many others will let us read their works.
Others may want to share their favorite poem and maybe tell us, what it was about that one that touched their emotions at the time.
Also a general discussion of poetry should be welcome.
Well, anything goes within the topic of
Poetry.
Being Danish, I should like to share a Danish poem by Piet Hein (December 16, 1905-April 17, 1996)
a scientist, mathematician, inventor, designer, author, and poet.
Among many, many other things, he wrote these little poems called 'Grooks' full of subtle humour and insight.
This one is to the point and very elegant in my opinion and worthy of a flip in your mind.


Taking fun
as simply fun
and earnestness
in earnest
shows how thoroughly
thou none
of the two
discernest

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little mermaid, your Danish poet, Piet Hein reminds me somewhat of Ogen Nash, an American poet known for his light verse.
He loved to rhyme and was a great humorist...an example:

The Shrimp
by Ogden Nash

A shrimp who sought his lady shrimp
Could catch no glimpse
Not even a glimp.
At times, translucence
Is rather a nuisance.

Anyone else care to chime in?

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Alrighty then...here's a Monday quickie written while awaiting public transit... smile

If you stick to your conviction
Brace yourself with slight restriction
Slowly, slowly in time's womb
Strength unfailing will find room
To line the backbone of the spine
"Objectivity" - in rhyme.
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- while awaiting public transport, he-he smile
It's good.
More, please, Beverly
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Aloha, bjbdbest and little mermaid!

Aloha is a wonderful Hawaiian word that means both 'Hello' as well as 'Goodbye'. You have to really like those Hawaiians for that one. Such great and cool folks who know how to be so thoughtful and friendly. biggrin



Helpless

He walked through fields of emerald green,
Past hordes of great douglas firs,
The rustling waters of a winding brook played
It's sweet song of ages past.

He climbed a craggy hill and there he sat.
The sun touched him softly. Flights of sparrows
Dotted azure blue skies, giving evidence to the
Tranquil mood of nature this day.

All around him was beauty. Down below lay
Patches of daffodils and honey-suckle;
The fragrant wind flushed his face.
He arose and as if in a trance, stared into the heavens.

His face grimaced, and he shook his fist at The Fates.
A lonely tear escaped his eye.
He trudged down the rocky path.
How helpless a man without love.

I wrote this when I was 17. Originally had written 'shook his fist at God' then changed it to 'shook his fist at The Fates', as I thought it sounded more logical to use mythical characters. No Deity can promise love. That is up to us! rose
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Robert Frost (A great New England Poet)

"The Road Not Taken:"


Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth;

Then took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim,
Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
Though as for that the passing there
Had worn them really about the same,

And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black.
Oh, I kept the first for another day!
Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
I doubted if I should ever come back.

I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.
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Aloha Johnny Cool...Your youthful poem was filled with a young man's vision and quest for romance...I liked it!
Thank you for sharing.

@ Pink Moose...you beat me to it..."The Road Not Taken" is a favorite of mine and I was going to post it next.
The poem describes the tough choices people need to make when traveling the road of life.

Here's one I wrote long ago while on vacation:

Tropicmania

Uncertain meeting of the minds
Brought about by tropic chance
Began indifferent repartee
And gamblers game of near romance.

Palm and bamboo shrouded nite
Drunk with languid make-believe
Kisses sweeter than the air
As only magic moments weave.

Tomorrows hue is not the same
How carelessly the dice were tossed
Hold fast this tiny grain in time
For memories gained can soon be lost.
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It's so enjoyable to read your entries, be it others' or your own works.
This thread came off to a start better than I had expected, and that, I think, bodes well for it's future. Here is one:

Mend

Dead was my body
My soul was in tatters
I had to mend

His body was silenced
His soul was mangled
He had to mend

We looked at each other
Recognized the pain
The twinkle was baffling
I had to mend
I couldn't do this
He had to mend
He must do this

He opened his arms
His heart, his mangled soul
He was so sweet
I couldn't do this
I had to mend

He woke up my dead body
I tinkered his mangled soul
I couldn't do this
I had to mend
He must do this

I had to mend
I must do this

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I *really* like those poems, bjbdbest and little mermaid! applause
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Thank you, Johnny Cool.
I (we - dare I talk on behalf of you in this connection, Beverly?)
like yours as well. You were 17 when you wrote the first you posted.
You may have several to post from?

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